Writing blunders and how to fix them…

This is the eighth of twenty-five blog posts to celebrate my twenty-fifth published novel, A Skye Full of Stars. This blog piece is self-explanatory, titled ‘Familiar blunders when writing a novel’…

Familiar Blunders When Writing a Novel

There’s something about the first 10,000 words of a novel. I like them because (usually), nothing has gone wrong.

It’s after that problems might begin. They may include, but are not limited to, the following…

  1. I’ve begun the book in the wrong place. I get a MUCH better idea for Chapter 1. And probably Chapters 2-4, also. There’s no point carrying on with the angle I’d first thought of so I rewrite what I’d written from the new angle. Much better.
  2. I update my cast list and find I have four characters whose names begin with J or two characters called Peter. I make the necessary adjustments to my cast list and to my manuscript.
  3. While I’m at it, I update my timeline, find I’ve messed it up and have to go back and sort it out. I make the necessary adjustments to my manuscript.
  4. I get involved with promo for the last book and return to my WIP in short bursts. I lose continuity and realise I have far too many ideas for one book. It will end up about 300,000 words long.
  5. I feel like one of those people who keep fifty plates spinning on thin sticks. I’m worried I’m not keeping them all going, and I go back and read and edit what I have so far.
  6. I realise that the dynamics between certain characters are not coming out as I thought they were. I make the necessary adjustments to my manuscript.
  7. I realise that I do NOT have too many ideas for one book. I have too few. I panic and feel sick and begin scribbling new plot ideas on post-its. I may turn to chocolate.
  8. I find a hole in my plot. For some reason, the knowledge comes to me when I’m either on a train or in the shower. I worry a lot. Sigh. Make notes as soon as I can. Make the necessary adjustments to my manuscript.
  9. I stare at the 63,449 words of my manuscript and know that I’m going to sweat over unknotting my plot lines and bringing the book to a satisfying ending … so I write a blog entitled Familiar Blunders When Writing a Novel.


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